Friday, January 2, 2009

A Dream

Once in a cozy sleepy dream....



Morning rays shinning huts



Chirping birds....



Bushy acre of green grass



Splash with blue blue & blue....



A cool die....



Encroached me to stab



Nature was struggling



With global warming....



Across my heart mind & soul



Silence silence & silence more....



To overcome dream as a whole



A try a spy a raise of high hope



Allows me a scope



Dream is not that



Which arise in sleep



Dream is that



Which do not allow us to sleep....
Written by- Azakamarina
on-02-01-2009
Class-VI

10 comments:

  1. Lovely blog!. I have also had dreams that make me restless.
    Linda

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  2. You are terrific at this. Keep it up. You will do fine.

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  3. you painted a lovely image of being outdoor, the dreamlike feel of being awake and yet half-asleep

    keep up the good work!

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  4. Hi, Thanks for following my blog. Hope you have some interesting blogging adventures. Look forward to reading more from you soon. Happy New Year!

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  5. .."keep up the good work!"
    lovely painting! & lovely thoughts!..
    (i think u might consider including credits for photos /images etc too as in photo by-,& since u r using ur own images surely there would be no copyright issues)

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  6. Hello Azakamarina. You have a good insight with the eye of poetic verse. I'll enjoy reading more of yours as you post them...

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  7. I would like to honor you and your blog by presenting you with (The Honest Scrap Award) Just stop by to accept your award. It is well deserve. Once I get it posted

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  8. what lovely images you drew here. carry on...

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  9. i love this. wonderful thoughts. thanks for sharing.

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  10. Some lovely images in this... thanks for sharing!

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